Max monkey built a rocket
With spare parts from his pocket
Max flew to Mercury
He said he couldn't see
Venus was next
His phone couldn't text
Cause it rained sulfuric acid
He saw Earth but passed it
Max said Mars was icy
And Jupiter wasn't so nice-y
Saturn those rings
Uranus those things
And Neptune blew him away
All the way to Earth
Then Max knew how much
Space was worth.
Dear Mr.hael, I don't have much knowledge about astronomy. But thoughts of yours gave me a bit of meaning in the subject you touched.wonderful imaginations which taught me how to write a poem with a colorful meaning.good best wishes.ga.raj
ReplyDeleteHael, I know you may not have expected your poems to emerge almost a decade from when you initially posted them. However, your rhyme scheme and radical themes have revitalized my life and given me purpose again. I was stuck between a rock and a hard place, but Max the Monkey reached into the abyss and pulled me out, towards salvation. Thank you Hael, you will never truly know the extent of your positive impact on me and my family. You have changed my life.
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